Here you can the abominations i have created

Konec Zmizení

Basically I started drawing without think much of the story
In the end i've realised it is meh

plus i've tried to push myself during july (summer holydays)
so i've tried to draw, or atleast sketch two pages per day
in the end it resulted in very wonky
tho i am really proud of the pages 15 16 17 18 19 20, those vere the first ones i've made
(originally i had different idea for story)

All of this was pretty much excersise of HOW TO NOT do any sort of story

Basically in the end the working story was this:
A girl(Alice) is daughter of scientist who discovered that "magic" "ghosts" "wanderers" are real things
Basically in this story paranormal activities are real
Alice is very sensitive to these (medium), when she was little she saw weird things
her parents vere worried, since her father worked as lead researcher of psychology in Phoenix group
(an international organisation), he was trying to find why, eventually he conviced the director
(the badly sketched guy at page 22) to allow his to use the new brain scanner on her
but after she was connected wanderers(ghosts) appeared, something something happended
everyone present at the facility died, except her
8 years passed
the phoenix group ascension research test (PART) was formed as subject of Phoenix group
to research this phenomenon, and the incident
they acquired Alice, repeated the test but limited
Wanderers appeared
Alice went unconscious, upon waking she was confused
When she went home, her home (after her parents died, she was living with uncle,
but he is currently abroad for work)
her home was broken and when she went inside wanderer was here
she killed it
eventually another test was executed, this time higher power
wanderers began appearing, Angelika(the second girl, the one whom Part also found to be sensitive to paranormal,
but less than Alice, so as measure against death of personel they used her)
caughted Alice, and portal opened
both ended in the second world(?)

Eventually they would have returned, something something,
phonix group gets caught in internal battle and humanity has to unite again to defeat wanderers
and the wanderers and the second world would have been actually man-made somehow???

idk, i started this with idea that i wanted to explore psychology of motivation, but hell has this become not fun to draw
i got deep in bad deep psychology thinking, ending up depressed myself
especially since at the time i've thought of the final thing, i haven't felt best myself, but keeping working on this just made me stuck in that mindset

i really should focus more on stories where i don't try to explore any sort of deep things
maybe better it'd be better to deeply explore a technlogy, or some kind of magic, or worldbuilding than to try badly analyse characters disregarding fun
idk