Here you can the abominations i have created

Determinon

I've tried to do some sort of magic
really only goal with this i've had was to improve my drawing
the plot is thus the nonsense i've thought at the moment
its drawing is really wonky

Basically some girl accidentally gets into crossfire between the forces of galaxian emperor and rebel group,
the god of luck steps in and saves the girl who then is the human with greatest ability to do the magic.
The gods (beings with greatest ability to do magic are in very sensitive balance, so that well causes most to turn against her.

My original plan was that the rebel group leader (Aelie, the one running into sewer on the last page)
would try to use the portagonist (Niké) to her own benefit and since Niké's magic ability is already
far above the limit that lets the being to absorb other magic energy sources, that she would try make
her even stronger for her to eat and reestabilish universe

All that while throwing up some vague philosphicalotheological concepts about comology,
how it's defined by the fight of the creator(determinant a) and their first failed creation (determinant b)
and how they are locked up in the infinite war which as byproduct created enough stability to let other
lifeforms form out of their remaints war. So the god of luck would act on the behalf of one of determinants

I've started drawing the second part (originally i've planned 4 parts) but i quickly realised it would turn
into bad attempt at deep philosophy, and it wouldn't be the kind of story which is fun drawing,
so that may never see the light of sun.
Anyways even in current state it's filled up with my magicallopseudoscienco mubling already.

Note that these are compressed, else it'd take 274MiB for this abomination

these last two are the little i started to work on chapter 2 (Nebeské císařství/Heavenly empire)